Media A2

2nd draft feedback

From looking back at the feedback given back to us as a group . We was told to improve the whole documentary because:

• •the documentary was too informative and people won't be learning anything.
• •not enough interviews
• •coming of the whole topic of brands
• the voice-over sounded boring and needed to be more energetic 
• the whole documentary needed to focus on a certain aspect of Apple

posted by jenny @ 16:09