Media A2

Editing during half-term

After showing our documentary there were massive changes which needed to be done. We were told that our documentary does not focus on an actual topic and that there is too much random information being throw out at the same time. we were also told that the draft was confusing. Webhad to rearrange and make numerous changes to the 3rd draft

• have more interviews
• ask people about the I am a Mac campaign 
• be more creative and ask people what each brand name means to them by showing them a brand name and them giving us three words that come to their head when they see it .
• too use of footage that does not belong to us. 

posted by jenny @ 18:24